Saturday, January 11, 2014

The morning kickbox - Part I

Its a WOW Post :)

“A …  A… Aaah … slowly  Sandy”, the painful voice pealed out of the society gym. With a sniggered look on his face, Godbole quickly called up his morning walk buddy, “Hello… Joshi, come fast to the gym, someone’s making out here .” “Making out what yaar when gym won't be open only at this hour” said an old and confused Joshi. “Arrey making love idiot” said Godbole in a hushed voice. Both Joshi and Godbole sneaked into the room from the window to find Sandy, the new fitness trainer making Neeta stretch her legs but for side splits beyond her limits. 

This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.

The post had to contain word Love and the story had to be completed in just 5 sentences. I hope you liked the attempt at short fiction.


  1. Upma, This is so unusual with an apt ending! Stretching exercises are painful! :)
    Congrats for WOW :)
    Thanks a lot for being my 50th Follower :)

    1. Thanks Anita. I am glad you liked it. And congrats for your increased fan following... 50 is a figure to rejoice. So any special post for me ...😊

  2. Superbly written.
    Waiting for Part 2 (I hope there is a Part 2 !!!)
    Keep Writing and Blogging
    Vikram Karve
    Academic and Creative Writing Journal Vikram Karve

    1. Thanks a ton vikram sir ... Hoping to write a part 2

  3. congrats Upma..really simply WOW :)-